buhm buhm buhm....
i gotta poem fo ya.
wanna hear it? here it go.
A TIME MY WORLD CHANGED!
i once was a boy
then my world changed
i once was a child
then my world changed
i lived the life of a greedy bastard
i lived the life of a lazy student
i lived the life of a scared father
i lived the life of a lost hobo
i once was incontent
then my world changed
i once cared what you thought
then my world changed
i live the life of a proud son
i live the life of a diligent scholar
i live the life of an earned father
i now have a home.
6 comments:
amayzing.
especially with the narration going on simultaeously. >.<
*snickers*
we like the EMOtions.
=]
wow. I wasn't expecting anything short of amazing but....wow.
...
i liked the other one better.
jk!!
it was pretty intense. nice work.
I like how you used repetition. Very nice. :]
I don't really know what to say except it was really good! Sorry this isn't a very specific comment or whatever.
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